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Getting the written feedback from those who gave it was very helpful. Right now I was to reflect a little on the stop motion section because that was the one I received the more idea, critic and perspective. It was not until I saw it up on the projector and read your responses that a way to correct it came to me. Almost every part o this project is using photoshop 3d animation. To smoothen the motion between rotating the telescope in stop motion and zooming in. I decided to speed up the stop motion frames per second, remove the first section(helping with color shift and jerkiness) but also take the last image of the telescope rotating and apply a 3d layer. This 3d layer or plane allows me to create a similar motion to the telescope as I have already done to the planets. this also gave me a little room for a creative element. I mean the project is following a, I guess you can say straight forward approach to astronomy documentaries, which leaves creative outlets hard to apply. I dont know but thanks for the help it is stronger now.